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In April, which is poetry month, I attended a poetry workshop with Marilyn Dumont, one of my favourite poets. To prepare for the workshop, she asked us to collect words that are part of a history, or that someone at a specific time would use. Naturally, and because I had recently attended a Finno-Ugric drum workshop with Dalva Lamminmaki, I turned to my Finnish heritage. Also, I had been thinking of words that can call up beauty, so I had been scribbling words of pleasing sounds into my scribbler. In the end, I wrote up 10 lists of words.
Here are two lists:
bells
reindeer skin
drum
protection
help
susurring
shushing
swishing
journey
antlers
birch bark headdress
keyhole
spirit animal
dived
descended
climbed
slept
dreamt
marveled
encircled
trembled
honoured
scattered
rained
At the workshop, Marilyn asked us to play with the word cache we had collected and let the words lead us to new patterns and sounds. We were to convey something palpable through juxtapositions, through sound synchronicities. Dwell in disorder, she said. Pay attention to images, textures, colours. Commit to unfolding language, following sound to discover meaning. Above all, we were not to think about product, but to enjoy playing with language. In my playing, I combined some of the words I had collected and, eventually, playing with space too, I shaped the poem below. I added a title and fiddled with a few words and phrases.
The Calling of Directions
Itään:
to the East
As stars slept
rocks journeyed
Deep blue dreamt of dancing
Gifts scattered, flying from
the rumble of reindeer,
the utterance
unnameable.
Etelään: to the
South
On the mountain carved with syllabics
in the forest of illusions
Whispers dreamt red ochre
Rattle rained flying antlers
in a shaman language
old,
drunk, ancestral.
Länteen: to the West
Rattle scattered blue sound,
echoing soft inscriptions
Small bells dreamt cold water pearls,
falling forever forward
River rained moon-eyed fish,
silver-skinned
delicious.
Pohjoiseen: to the
North
A shape-shifting old woman,
skiing overhead, on the horizon
a surprise of animal gifts
Lime green sky laughing
the upper branches of
the Great Tree
3 comments:
Very interesting exercise... Loved your choice of words and the resulting poems :) Hugs, M.
have you been doing any writing, MP? You were such a busy blogger!
No, Taina, I'm afraid I've quit writing in my blog. I'm now more active in Facebook. Are you in FB??? If you are, we should become friends :) Hugs, M.
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